Wow, I have been so caught up with school and other stuff that I haven't posted for months! But I am starting up posting again. I have recently joined a Writer's Club that is absolutely awesome, and I am going to be posting stories and snippets as I go along. This is the starting paragraph for the first story I am writing. Now, this story was 'supposed' to be a short story to enter a competition, but it ran away from me :) so I am writing this for a few pages, then a second story based from this first story will be what I use for the competition. Please let me know what you think, and just a note: This is something I've tried to get people sucked into the story. Hope you like!
"The huge tower teetered over the minuscule ant, slowly falling and rumbling. The ant, realising the imminent danger he faced, raced away in the opposite direction, sprinting as fast as his tiny legs would carry him. The effort was wasted. The skyscraper smashed into the earth, blasting the insignificant ants’ body into smithereens..."
"The huge tower teetered over the minuscule ant, slowly falling and rumbling. The ant, realising the imminent danger he faced, raced away in the opposite direction, sprinting as fast as his tiny legs would carry him. The effort was wasted. The skyscraper smashed into the earth, blasting the insignificant ants’ body into smithereens..."